One word....awesome!

Usually reading the first stanza of poems, you wouldnt want to read that specific poem any longer. But not yours, yours makes you read it with its intense wording,and structure. It was very good indeed. Might i ask who this person is that lingers your defeat? Is it your father, or is it some other type of person? You dont have to tell me. It was a 5 out of 5.

-Jennifer.

Also, hehe- Is it just you bearing what comes? If so, you shouldnt forse this upon yourself, life is made to be lived day by day, not to just throw it all away with pure resentment. Dont get me wrong, i understand the title. "The battle within", but sometimes people talk about something thats within, thats not so within really. I know i do so.

-Jennifer.

Force*

Truly impressive. This is an excellent poem. Read some of mine if you get time.