Comments : While you are Gone

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaime

    You did a good job with that, and I hope your friend comes home soon.

  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    You write wonderfully well. I liked this poem so much.. Thanks for your comments.. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    Thank you all it means alot to me to hear from you.....love and huggs...missy

  • 19 years ago

    by WakeboardxChick

    Hey that was great. Keep it up
    JaNeAn

  • 19 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    You've written this really well with depth, meaning and control over what you write. Well Done! Keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    Thank you all it really means alot to me to see your comments.....love and huggs....missy

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    Whoah, girl.... thats amazing. awesome poem

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You are the best friend a person could ever dream of,
    It’s like you were sent down from the heavens above.

    I love this part very much,
    And i can say the same think about my best friend (he's a guy),
    I don't think i can pull it through,
    If he will ever leave me,
    Cause i need him by my side,
    To correct all my mistakes,
    And console me when i'm sad.

    This is indeed a very nice and full of feelings poem, i can see you put your heart into it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very nice poem.I like your poetry.Your really good.well lataz

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Really liked this poem!!!
    so much emotion, and that's so sweet you feel that way.
    Take care xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey this is so cute, your friend sounds lucky...to have a friend like you..hope she has fun!!! great writing as usual i loved it