I guess this poem's okay...not bad for a rookie ne ways...

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Firstly, about your poem - it's beautiful. I read your profile and was baffled that you don't think you're a good writer. Your poems are amazing!

Secondly, thank you so much for being the first person to review and comment on my poem!!! really appreciate it!

Keep up the fantastic work - look forward to reading more of your work. xxx

Aww hun, very beautiful poem, I think I got the message :P From what I think I think it is fabolous, keep it up hun

Wow, very beautiful... It is truely inspiring.

"Something deep inside you,
Needs to prove that you are strong.
The angels sit there waiting patiently,
Yet again you prove them wrong."

Nicely worded.