by Gedi
Pretty good, although you should definetly consider adding in the necessary comas and periods. |
by Ebony
That poem kind of scared me but it's really good |
Hm, that poem was good. But it needs punctuation. It sort of had a story line, which i really like. Although the person that wants to meet death, should think about it more carefully. You'll leave cherished thing behind, and the ones you love as well. |