Liquid Rose

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 26, 2005


This poem is more a song I wrote, so it may not fit all of your poets eyes....

Watching slowly
As you walked away
Through these sleepless eyes
No sleep for days

No turn, no glance
No feel from you
A simple hi, but no thought
Is it no longer true?

Let this liquid rose bleed...

I don't know anymore
I'm still confused
Still hurt, still pain
Starting to feel used

A hard heart is forming
I can't keep this going on
Staying awake all night
With no sleep till dawn

Let this liquid rose bleed
Don't make it stop
We know how it feels
To bleed every drop

Love isn't lingering
Its touch used to be here
Now I've seem to replace it
With hurt, pain, and fear

Don't bother anymore
For you I used to have a need
And so did you....
Now let this liquid rose bleed

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  • 19 years ago

    by Clarissa

    That wud be a good song if only i could hear =( but great job i reely loved it

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Well done :P

    For a song the flow is really good and theres no contructive addvice I can give :(
    I really enjoyed it, your really improving as a poet and your love poems are becoming better well done once again keep it up.

    Lisa xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Great talent - wonderful imagination. I loved it and there wasn't a fault with it :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thatd make a great song if only you could record it and put it on here lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Erin

    U right songs too?! i think im in love! lol do u play an instrument? cos if u play the guitar i think im guna faint. anyway great song, if u ever like make a tune wit it let me know and tell me about it.

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