I loved the concept and imagery of the liquid rose.. as for u classifying it more as a song, i think it works both ways.. solid 5/5.. and thanx for the praise on my work..

Good work, I could see this as a song and it would be really good. keep writing:)

Nice job i liek it a lot
"Love isn't lingering
Its touch used to be here
Now I've seem to replace it
With hurt, pain, and fear"

i liek that part the most becaosue i been there. keep up the amazing work 5/5

Very good poem / song

Great poem... I liked this one a lot... 5/5!

I love this poem (or song or whatever) better than the other one but i feel this way alot to good job keep up the good work 5/5 good job

U right songs too?! i think im in love! lol do u play an instrument? cos if u play the guitar i think im guna faint. anyway great song, if u ever like make a tune wit it let me know and tell me about it.

Thatd make a great song if only you could record it and put it on here lol

Great talent - wonderful imagination. I loved it and there wasn't a fault with it :)

Well done :P

For a song the flow is really good and theres no contructive addvice I can give :(
I really enjoyed it, your really improving as a poet and your love poems are becoming better well done once again keep it up.

Lisa xx

That wud be a good song if only i could hear =( but great job i reely loved it