by Steven Beesley Aug 27, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The swirling of the leaves |
by Lovely Bones
I love this!! You explain it so perfectly.. You make me crave Autumn. Good job!! |
The picture that this paints in my mind is so beautiful! I loved it! |
This is amazing, Steven, truly amazing.Autumn is my favorite time of year and here you have captured so vividly autumn in all the senses-the sights, scents, the feel.I am really impressed with this poem.Such fantastic images!You have captured the very essence of autumn.Such an excellent poem! |
by Simon Hayes
Brilliant job. Such beautiful descriptions, you've painted the perfect scenery which looks just like the morning outside as I see it! Gave me some shivers reminding of how good Autumn actually is. |
I love this poem. autumn is my favourite month, and you've described it so well i feel i can touch, smell, see everything. |