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by shezza Aug 27, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
I open my eyes, but i cannot see a thing. everything is so dark, and I'm scared, i really am. people are always talking, about life only going one way. but somehow for some reason, mine seems to have trailed away. it isn't as easy as it looks, although i really try. my life is coming to an end, i know I'm going to die. what has happened, why am i here? stricken with both, shock and fear. i look a bit to my left, and see what was once a car. someone seems to have noticed me, yet their voice sounds so far. they come to my aid, but something is not right. one of them turn away and i hear him say, "I'm sorry, but she has lost this fight" i turn away, to look to the right. and there i see, a most dreadful sight. it was my mummy, and she was dead. she had taken, a fatal blow to her head. i felt something warm, reach under my body. and then realized, it was my beloved daddy. he was crying, as he held me tight. and my life disappeared, into the night. up in heaven, i met mummy with glee. and she said, that daddy loves me. "yes i know mummy, but why are we here? why did we leave daddy behind, to live a nightmare?" and mummy looked at me, as she started to talk. "because my dear, a man was to stupid to walk" i looked at her with, a stunning glare. and she kept on speaking, with note of despair. "he had been drinking evil water, and his car lost control. and as it hit ours, ours began to roll" i still looked at her, tears in my eyes, "but does this mean, that we have died?" mummy looked at me, with a glare so strong. and i realized i was right, although i would have rather be wrong. "I'm sorry my darling, but daddy will be fine. come on now, it is time." "time for what?" i asked the clouds. "to go into heaven" replied my mummy with proud. and as we stepped through the great golden gates, i heard daddy's voice once more. and he said he'd always love me, forever and more.
by BeeBeeGun
This was a really good poem sad but well written your a really good writer keep up the good work Binkz
by Monica
OMG i love this poem! where the hell did this come from? it rox! luv ya always, Monica XOXO