Nice, i can really feel the emotion, and i hope this isnt about you.

This is really good, im gonna read some more of your work. id also appreciate it if you checked out some of mine, thx

Good work hun, keep it up, and remember - in the end, everything is ok. and if its not ok, its not the end.
love tanya xoxo

This poem reminded me (sort of) of two poems I wrote, one called "Sisyphus" and another called "Behind My Mask." I thought that grammatically there are some things that could be fixed in this poem. For example, quotation marks can be placed around text that is supposed to be spoken by the character

eg
This poor teen just answered, "nothing mom, just getting ready for tomorrow"

but besides the grammatical stuff, this poem is pretty good. It reminds me a bit of stuff that I've read elsewhere as well, but it is still done well.

Omg..........that was so so sad omg im so omg great work why was she sad??? id appreciate it if u looked at some of my work you might like it im not sure but your poems are really deep keep it up...........

Thats a great poem and i hope to read more.

Hey, i know how u feel trust me i like this poem u a good writer check out mine plz...ttul

Omg i love it soooooooo much i can totally relate to it

Hey, i read ur work ages ago so just thought id take another look.

you are such a talented writter. so many people can relate.. not to menition me. after everything thats happened to day i am almost in tears. this poem is amazing
keep up the good work - you're never alone xx