by Emilia
Very good... keep up the good work.. =D 5 stars for this one.. hugs |
by Lydie
Good write.. at the start it was a bit bleuah.. but it was worth reading for the last line alone... I quite liked it.. I don't particually like love poems but you captured this one quite well.... |
by Melanie
This is another really good poem. Your poetry sounds so professional because of your large vocabulary i love it. but i dont like the using r instead of are i used to do that but now i think its kind of lazy and it doesn't go along with how mature your writting is but i mean i really love your poems they make you (or at least me) think. and you were so right i do you my poems to as kind of a alternative to cutting and i also know im a terrible speller i need to work on then good job |