Great job with this poem. It's great to hear how people still need their parents to be there for them.

Hey, thanks for the explanation. lol I see people put 'double etheree' and stuff into their titles and I never actually knew what it was *blush* I'm still a learner hehe. Anyway, I really like that all your work is unique and that you always try different ones out. You've taught me so much ina matter of 2 poems and I plan on challenging myself to do one of these sometime. Thanks for everything. Keep writing, you're a really talented writer! (And welcome to my favourites)

Excellent poem. great!!! 5/5! wonderful!

It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.