by Amanda Bee Aug 27, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
One sunny afternoon on the playground |
by Little Dot
This poem is very good. i like the rhyme scheme and the flow all throughout this poem. |
by HansRik
A very good poem. The structure is very rigid, and yet you manage to control your ideas in an eloquent manner. Very well done, and an excellent poem indeed! |
by Amanda Bee
Thanks Nada for the comment. The repeats are part of the poem. The scheme of the poem is: ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the lines that have to be repeated:) |
Amanda, |