Harmony (Rondel)

by Amanda Bee   Aug 27, 2005


One sunny afternoon on the playground
Two little girls in pigtails, holding hands
As they construct a castle of golden sand
The harmony of their laughter is all around

And nothing intrudes upon the glorious sound
No concerns beyond building a castle that’s oh-so grand
One sunny afternoon on the playground
Two little girls in pigtails, holding hands

Hand in hand, they brazenly dive into the mound
Destroying their whimsical castle made of sand
Squeals of harmonious pleasure as they land
Immersed in the friendship that they found
One sunny afternoon on the playground

*A Rondel is a French form consisting of 13 lines.
ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    This poem is very good. i like the rhyme scheme and the flow all throughout this poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

    A very good poem. The structure is very rigid, and yet you manage to control your ideas in an eloquent manner. Very well done, and an excellent poem indeed!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Thanks Nada for the comment. The repeats are part of the poem. The scheme of the poem is: ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the lines that have to be repeated:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Amanda,

    Extremly well written and I throughlly enjoyed reading it. Lovely piece of work.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve