Comments : Harmony (Rondel)

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Amanda,

    Extremly well written and I throughlly enjoyed reading it. Lovely piece of work.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Thanks Nada for the comment. The repeats are part of the poem. The scheme of the poem is: ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the lines that have to be repeated:)

  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

    A very good poem. The structure is very rigid, and yet you manage to control your ideas in an eloquent manner. Very well done, and an excellent poem indeed!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    This poem is very good. i like the rhyme scheme and the flow all throughout this poem.