Wow...amazing!!!! i really love it. thank you for your comments, they mean so much :D keep up the great work!
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Wow thats real clever

i might try writing like that sometime
i gave it 5

Excellent!!! A truly nice job!!!

Beautifull. your poems have a beautiful simple elegance

Hey! I have heard you mentioned all around the site and thought I'd give your stuff a long look. I noticed that this one has apretty low number of comments compaired to your other masterpieces, so I thought I'd read it. I am so glad that I did too, It's a very unique style and a very well written poem. That was incredible. Great write :)