Comments : To Death

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Not bad, a little rough here and there on the wording, the sentance balance was ok, the rymeing shceme so-so. 3/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I love how you started out this poem it was really good, the rhyming was a little off or whatever but it got better towards the end. Good Job!