Ur poetry is definatly something i havn't read before. poetry seems to have a little bit of ourselves in it, and i can tell how much u put ur self into your poetry. I've never read any kind of poetry, within this theme, of "whipped" (btw the title goes good.) but one comment i would like to say, is to try working on ur language skills, like using proper english. no offence, but with double negatives, u seem to have alot of them. it makes you should....ignorant or something. no offence.... even tho i like your work, u would never be able to get published without going thru tons of editing, and they would compleatly alter your work. so its good to practice them skills.