I love your poetry. Just the way you desribe everything, with twisted words and twisted sentence. So it's lovely, in a dark twisted way.
For example...

"The sentence is formed, it clouds my brain
where's the oxygen to guide it through my veins?
I put it all together, my puzzled thoughts
Now lungs are collapsing to the love I once fought."

It may just be reality but most people wouldn't write it like that, I think it's very unique and creative of you. :-).

I love the message it delievers, as I'm sure many can relate, the whole 'choking on words I'd like to say' and many other parts. You should never be ashamed of your feelings, for you cannot help but feel them. You're an amazing girl Renee, beautiful, talented, smart, nice and funny. You're wonderful, and you shouldn't hide like you do. I love the Renee I know and I bet everyone, even the people around you, would love the you I know too. :-). I love you hun, take care...okay? EEE> xoxox talk to you later today.

Love always,
Mortie.xxxx