Really good poem, I like how its flows

Brill brill brill brill brill. what else can i say? somebody buy me a bigger thesaurus.

Once again you've enthralled me with your work. this poem is great! had me stumped at first, though...thought it really was about pirates at sea ehehehe...wonderful piece!!!

Hee hee! Great poem Luce! I like the way it's really fun but has a serious undertone! Yet another beauty!

Can i comment again just to tell you i love it? ah well....i love it lucy!