Usually when thats said to a girl, she thinks it cute. But when she thinks about it-she remembers who hurt her by saying those same words. You might want to look at a different structure to base your wording on. But none the less its a 3 out of 5. Sorry, if I'm harsh.. :(

-Jennifer.

I think its a really good poem i like it alot! If a guy felt that way about me I would be real lucky to have him... but anyways keep up the good work ur a great writer
~Britt~