by CHOKE
I don't want you to go...and no girl is worth your tears...i wont lie to you i cry when i get my heart broken, i kno you've probably been told all of this before but hun, one day you'll find that girl that will make all your dreams come true, that girl that you can grow old with and who will love you forever...never give up...if you need someone to vent to...im here hun...dont keep all of your emotions bottled up inside, believe me nothing good will come of it. newayz as much as i hope you dont hurt yourself i still enjoyed this poem, 5/5 as alwayz, and if you aren't gonna hurt yourself please tell me....and be honest...because im so worried right now... |
by CHOKE
That's what I'm here for hun...to help you in any way possible. I'm glad to know that I helped you! If you had killed yourself...I don't know what I would have done if I found out! I hate it when people kill themselves, it breaks my heart and kills my soul when my heart breaks and cries for those who answer death's call! I'm sorry things are so bad for you though, but I've lived with all my pain for 7 years...I know you have the strength to make it through! |
Good poem. |
Good poem. Not very strong in the middle with the flow but overall very good. |
by CHOKE
Hey i just wanted to tell u that i made it through the hurricane...i had to leave yesterday to come to georgia, bcuz we couldnt stand it without power and water any longer....thankz for checking up on me!....im glad i can finally get bck on here! i missed the computer and all my friends...oh and power and water lol. |
by CHOKE
Oh and james |
by Meg Wilson
That poem was deep...5/5... |