Comments : The searing kiss

  • 19 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I don't want you to go...and no girl is worth your tears...i wont lie to you i cry when i get my heart broken, i kno you've probably been told all of this before but hun, one day you'll find that girl that will make all your dreams come true, that girl that you can grow old with and who will love you forever...never give up...if you need someone to vent to...im here hun...dont keep all of your emotions bottled up inside, believe me nothing good will come of it. newayz as much as i hope you dont hurt yourself i still enjoyed this poem, 5/5 as alwayz, and if you aren't gonna hurt yourself please tell me....and be honest...because im so worried right now...
    *eLiZaBeTh*

  • 19 years ago

    by CHOKE

    That's what I'm here for hun...to help you in any way possible. I'm glad to know that I helped you! If you had killed yourself...I don't know what I would have done if I found out! I hate it when people kill themselves, it breaks my heart and kills my soul when my heart breaks and cries for those who answer death's call! I'm sorry things are so bad for you though, but I've lived with all my pain for 7 years...I know you have the strength to make it through!
    -eLizabeth

  • 19 years ago

    by BloodShotEyes

    Good poem.

    *Blood Shot Eyes*

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Good poem. Not very strong in the middle with the flow but overall very good.
    ~FotF

  • 19 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Hey i just wanted to tell u that i made it through the hurricane...i had to leave yesterday to come to georgia, bcuz we couldnt stand it without power and water any longer....thankz for checking up on me!....im glad i can finally get bck on here! i missed the computer and all my friends...oh and power and water lol.

  • 19 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Oh and james

  • 19 years ago

    by Meg Wilson

    That poem was deep...5/5...