Suicide

One worded lines. Ive never read a poem like this. And I have to admitt, I liked it. The words you chose were really good. Keep it up :P 5/5

luv natalie x-x

It's different but I was thrown off by the title as I've read to much lately about suicide and your title just reminded me of that. Decent poem though

I like this poem a lot. It's different, and shows what a versatile writer you are. Keep up the great work :-)

DFK