I like this poem a lot. It's different, and shows what a versatile writer you are. Keep up the great work :-)

DFK

It's different but I was thrown off by the title as I've read to much lately about suicide and your title just reminded me of that. Decent poem though

One worded lines. Ive never read a poem like this. And I have to admitt, I liked it. The words you chose were really good. Keep it up :P 5/5

luv natalie x-x