by Jessica Aug 27, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I love you so, but you love her. |
by arie
Hi i like it, just a little advice. not to be mean, cuz i like it. maybe in your poems try not to be so repetitive. cuz if you have a lot of repitition, a lot of people dont finish it. but i liked it. im going through the same thing. if you want to use the same meaning, choose a different word other than her. but good job/ |