What I want

by M MEM   Aug 27, 2005


Maybe the happy ending
Comes after the end
Its getting so hard
I'm missing the bend
Heading over the cliff
Diving down fast
The only thing that can save me
Is something you can send
All I want is free
All I want is true
All I want, I can get from you.
What do I want?
Love
Unconditional love.
Save me
Save me from the cliff
The cliff
Soon to be the end.

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  • 19 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem.

    1 suggestion though. i feel that the line

    "All I want, I can get from you." would be better of as 2 lines. ie.

    All I want,
    I can get from you.

    just a suggestion.

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    I can only hope you find this love, it is out there somewhere waiting for you, you just have to wait to find it, I am sure you will find this love, the poem was really emotional and showed how you feel well, good luck and take care
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