So lonely in my thoughts

by Amanda   Aug 27, 2005


Look on my face,
Do you see a smile?
No it’s not there,
You just see me cry,

Why are you crying?
Is what you asked me,
My life is messed up,
So why can’t you see,

Friends are not there,
when I need them most,
No-one to listen,
I’m just a ghost,

So full of sadness,
I hide all my tears,
Until I’m in bed,
Alone with my fears,

All I want is love,
I want a small cuddle,
Told I’ll be alright,
But I’m in a muddle,

Why am I here?
I’m living a lie,
Give me a break,
And just let me die!

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

I just needed to express myself because I'm feeling so lonely right now.

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  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    I liked this part most "No-one to listen,
    I’m just a ghost" How often am I not in that position... Well, great job anyway!

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Wow, great poem! I hope you're okay, and I hope you find somebody! I'm sorry you feel this way. You really did a great job.

    .:*-*Krissy*-*:.

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Aww dont be lonley! even if ya dont know it someone out there loves ya!! it was great, and i know how you feel, the poem overall was a little shaky at points but the last stanza was awesome. i gave it a 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Oh dear sorry you feel so lonely, I am sure so many people would be happy to give you a cuddle and try to make everything better, you expressed your emotions well and made the poem interesting, its a shame this is how you feel, I hope that you feel better soon

    My favourite stanza was this one
    "All I want is love,
    I want a small cuddle,
    Told I’ll be alright,
    But I’m in a muddle"

    I hope you get that cuddle soon..

    take care
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by M MEM

    These are very good ideas, i think it could've flowed a little better, but it works by itself.

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