Great job, Amanda...well expressed. I feel like this too at times... I guess we all do....

Hugs, love, Ann

I know exactly how u feel. i feel totally alone too. never hesitat to send me aprivate message cuz i'll always take the time to listent to u and i'll never judge u. Take care.

Very nice

You got all of your feelings out and that's great hun, but PLEASE don't say that you don't have any friends to listen, what about me??? I'm your friend and you KNOW that, I'll listen noght and day 24/7....Please talk to me....Well I'll write you an email, I was going to that later cause I needed to talk to you....I know that you are here for me when i need a friend, but please remember that I'm here for you too

Friends are not there,
when I need them most,
No-one to listen,
I’m just a ghost,

Made me cry.....Babe please don't be sad..

Much love sabrina

There are times in where everybody feels lonely...so i'm with u on that one. keep up the great job...and keep doing what u doing...5/5

It is sad, but it flowed nicely, its how so many people feel, just hangtight and everything will be alright, hey that rhymed ^_^ lol 5/5

These are very good ideas, i think it could've flowed a little better, but it works by itself.

Oh dear sorry you feel so lonely, I am sure so many people would be happy to give you a cuddle and try to make everything better, you expressed your emotions well and made the poem interesting, its a shame this is how you feel, I hope that you feel better soon

My favourite stanza was this one
"All I want is love,
I want a small cuddle,
Told I’ll be alright,
But I’m in a muddle"

I hope you get that cuddle soon..

take care
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Aww dont be lonley! even if ya dont know it someone out there loves ya!! it was great, and i know how you feel, the poem overall was a little shaky at points but the last stanza was awesome. i gave it a 5/5

Wow, great poem! I hope you're okay, and I hope you find somebody! I'm sorry you feel this way. You really did a great job.

.:*-*Krissy*-*:.

I liked this part most "No-one to listen,
I’m just a ghost" How often am I not in that position... Well, great job anyway!