Who should've stayed....

by kat   Aug 27, 2005


This was our dream,
all that will fade,
letting go of memories,
all those we made,
pain and anger,
sadness and guilt,
the many blocks of jealousy,
is all that we have built,
dreams shattered,
they're gone,
scars left behind
from holding on too long.
A page of my life has turned,
what does he say?
Ashes later lay burned,
by the man who chose not to stay,
my heart,
barely unbroken,
by the patters scars have made,
all of this a token,
to the man who should've stayed...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey good job...Yer really good for your age!!! KEEP IT UP and comment on mine sometime.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This poem was terrific! I loved the flow and I loved the ending. Painfully expressed. Great job, Kat.