Do You Want Us At All (true story about my dad)

by Spitfire   Aug 27, 2005


I'M NOT letting pull me around everywhere
u can talk the talk
but u cant walk the walk
THATS BULL
i waited 5 hours for u !!!
in my room, crying
looking out the widow
wondering if the next car that goes by is u
but it never was
then u called
i got mad because u said u were just hanging out
i got fend up with u treating me like this !!
I'm not some kind of toy thats in your pocket
i no longer am going to bend over back wards for U!!!!!
and Nathan is getting older now
hes going to know whats going on
and he will feel the same way as me
and u wont like it when he tell u
make up your mind
whether u need us or not
whether u want us to call u or not
WHETHER U WANT US AT ALL !!!!!

about my dad
and Nathan is my lil bro
hes getting shipped around by his mom and his/my dad

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lu

    So sorry that your dad treats you like that. just remember what goes around comes around and someday he will need you and you'll have moved on to a better life where someone truely loves you ..unconditional love is what I hope you find..take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Haley

    Like somebody said in ur other poem, it seems like u've been thru so much!! never give up, things will happen in ur life that just plain suck..it happens to everyone, and while i cant say that i can relate to u, i know that not having a father around must be really hard, but just know that people are there to talk if u ever need neone..and im sure u didnt put these kinds of poems on the site for people like me to give u a big lecture, lol, but just always know that all things happen for a reason! sorry so long, lol, but great poem! full of emotion! i loved it! 5/5

    *!haley!*

  • 19 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    I love it, 5/5 thansk for the comment.. it means a lot

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    That's a really good poem. i like it a lot. i hardly ever see my dad too. i actually have a poem about him on here too. But stay strong, and don't let your father break u down.

  • 19 years ago

    by alyssa

    Omg this is so sad. I'm so sorry you guys have to go through that!. This is a really good poem though. You're a really good writer. 5/5
    take care,
    alyssa

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