This wus a very good poem, thanx, i read ur pro...my great grampa left us 5 days ago, sorry

Omg this is so sad. I'm so sorry you guys have to go through that!. This is a really good poem though. You're a really good writer. 5/5
take care,
alyssa

That's a really good poem. i like it a lot. i hardly ever see my dad too. i actually have a poem about him on here too. But stay strong, and don't let your father break u down.

I love it, 5/5 thansk for the comment.. it means a lot

Like somebody said in ur other poem, it seems like u've been thru so much!! never give up, things will happen in ur life that just plain suck..it happens to everyone, and while i cant say that i can relate to u, i know that not having a father around must be really hard, but just know that people are there to talk if u ever need neone..and im sure u didnt put these kinds of poems on the site for people like me to give u a big lecture, lol, but just always know that all things happen for a reason! sorry so long, lol, but great poem! full of emotion! i loved it! 5/5

*!haley!*

So sorry that your dad treats you like that. just remember what goes around comes around and someday he will need you and you'll have moved on to a better life where someone truely loves you ..unconditional love is what I hope you find..take care