Nice one
very indepth i'd say
i like the way u wrote it
ur rele talented
our other poems are rele rele gd as well
im definately adding u too my favs
5/5 definately
k keep writting
if u could
pls check out my poems
thanx
smile always=)

Oh! interesting poem, quite a deep poem full of thought and interesting lines which made me want to carry on reading each line, it told its own little story which was interesting and sad at the same time, it captured me, well done to you and take care
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Nice poem. Very deep.

-Taylor

This is pretty good. I feel like this about my family. You were able to express lots of emotion without "beating around the bush" Good work