This is a great poem i luv it 5/5 all the way.

Thats really nice, and long yes lol its so expressive and thats what makes a fantastic poem

"Confusion or love
Heaven or hell
Both a confusion
Of living in a shell"
I love that stanza:)

It's an amazing poem, i love it. It's sad:'( *hugs* Keep up the good work babe.

~Jessica

That was a really sad poem, I particularly liked the stanza

"Confusion or love
Heaven or hell
Both a confusion
Of living in a shell"

It really stuck out from the rest of the poem, the whole poem was really good.. It had a really sad ending that so many people could relate to, so many people face that terrible hurt, I also liked the bit about ebing pushed back into the shell, well done to you on this one

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Excellent, i couldn't find anything wrong, 5/5!
Hate or love
Heaven or hell
Both a confusion
Of living in a shell
i like this segment a lot! it really stands out

Yes it was perfect! A great way to express yourself while the person reading gets an image of how the poet feels inside! Well done :)

Ooo i really liked this poem and the last stanza really ended the poem well
beautiful
5/5

That was very deep and kept me reading throughout..
hate or love
heaven or hell
both a confusion
of living in a shell

i loved this stanza.. it reli stood out of ur poem.. the rest of the poem was pretty. hmm.. how do u say it.. intense, and full of emotion.. i love ur style in writing...
keep it ups..
take care

Wow... amazing!!!!

"But that rose, that soft petal
Is too hard and you lost it all
Trips you off your feet
And then you have to crawl"

great write! keep it up.
-xXx-

What can i say that hasnt already been said? Your just awsome...

This was a terrific poem! Excelent job! Keep up the great work.

-Taylor

Wow, i loved this poem, it was really expressive adn i loved the stanza
Confusion or love
Heaven or hell
Both a confusion
Of living in a shell
the rest of the poem was good but that stanza was amazing keep it up xxxxx

I really like this poem, there is only one think i could come up with that was something I didn't like, I found that the start of some lines were the same, And to me it gets a little boring to read it like that, but all in all I really loved the poem it was Fabulouse I give you a 5/5

I really liked this poem. it all fitted together really well. the poem was split up into individual stanzas, all as great as the next. 5/5. keep writing luv vikki xx

Enjoyed this.. the flow was awesome.. i dunn0 but it seemed like at first the way u worded it it would be more for slow reading,.. i had that thought while reading it.. like an airy feeling i got from it.. light and fluffy.. i guess thats the only way to explain it.. good job.. good flow throughout,.. nice visuals, although the petal is a little played out,.. as is the rose/flower... i wouldnt exactly call it cliche th0.. i feel the hurt.. and could easily relate to this.. Cuts you in too deep... this line stood out to me.. i dunn0 whether its becuz it was so good or otherwise.. but it stood out.. guess its not the same old everyday phrase, which is a good thing.. good job.. 5/5

Really good 5/5..

Um... nice poem it kinda confused me but I'm always confused so great job! and keep writing!
-take care
-BrokenSmile

Hey... such beautiful words. I loved this poem. It deserves to be in the top rated... i'm happy for you =). By the way... I added you to my hotmail... so yeah, if big_red_dog_@hotmail.com comes up... that's me =D... anyways... rate and comment on me back sometime...

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Hate or love
Heaven or hell
Both a confusion
Of living in a shell

this is the stanza that reely is amazing and stands out wow 5/5 =)

Wonderful poem! Very well written! Had a great flow and was very deep and thoughtful. Full of emotion! I dunno if it was just me but i had to read this poem slowly, it made me think. I read it twice! lmao! =D Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
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~Chica~