Strong, keep writting strong

Oh dear, its so horrible when you are longing for help to get through troubles and it doesnt come, I hope this person does see sometime soon, the poem was good it showed your emotions and longing for realization, well done and I hope things get better

take care
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Or the pain behind my eyes
And my heart needs to be awake
might wanna re-word this, it doesn't match well, if you know what i mean.
The last paragraph is very strong, good job4/5

I know EXACTLY how it feels to not get help when needed. It's like everyone you care about just disappears at the first sign of trouble.(well it does to me) Keep your head up and smile :)

Short but sweet
this is a wonderful poem, the length doesnt matter, you said enough with the words you used, there was no need to say more
good job 5/5

Very good....flow was rough in areas but other then that nice job....luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I kno the feeling =(

Its awesome travis...5/5 for sure ! real intense & deep..
where have u been & how have u been ???
i've got a relatively new poem "murder or suicide" pls read it for me it doesnt matter if u vote or comment but it would be nice...
i really love that poem & ur a nice person to get feedback from..

HEY TRAVIS... I'VE ADDED U TO MY FAVOURITES.... !! I LOVE UR POEMS... IM GONNA READ SOME MORE AFTER I'M THRU WITH MY SEMINAR PRESENTATION.... TAKE CARE
THANKS FOR UR COMMENTS... IF THERE'S ANYTHING U WANT ME TO READ...IT'LL BE MY PLEASURE !
CHAO
LOVE
AMY

O my gosh i'm trying not to cry. I have the same feeling. good strong poem. keep up the work.

Sooo mouch emotion...I know that feeling, in a way..i can kind of relate..i loved it! You are a great writer