by RObC Aug 28, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Love is like a rose it blooms into something beautiful in the blink of a eye it comes to a fullness or so it may seem but if you are not careful it will shrivel and fade away leaving a broken heart shattered like a looking glass. |
by husbandlover
I love this .it's so awesome and expressful.i love how u express ur feelings!!rock on |
Okay. I think this piece is pretty wonderful...but I strongly suggest you go back and separate it, make it more inviting to the eye...it's all packed together and ongoing…seems like you’re rambling…that may just be the way it comes out of you, but afterward you can go back in…people are more likely to read it if it isn’t like that, doesn’t seem so long and easier to read/understand… Otherwise, I love it :) |