Okay. I think this piece is pretty wonderful...but I strongly suggest you go back and separate it, make it more inviting to the eye...it's all packed together and ongoing…seems like you’re rambling…that may just be the way it comes out of you, but afterward you can go back in…people are more likely to read it if it isn’t like that, doesn’t seem so long and easier to read/understand… Otherwise, I love it :)

I’m a club assistant for the "Unrequited Poets" Club…I’m going to go accept your application…hope to hear from you on the discussion board. Take care of yourself.

xxx

I love this .it's so awesome and expressful.i love how u express ur feelings!!rock on