Phew. That sure is something. Again, I suggest separating it, probably short lines, and stanzas would be nice as well. Really good work just could use some organizing. I know for some poets…it comes out of their minds rapidly without taking pauses…so I think it’d be a good idea to go back after you get it all out of you…make sense? If you work on it, let me know…

"and wake up next my pomes are a part of life deep thoughts written feelings to bear no can understand the artiest that is me."

I think you meant "poems" rather than "pomes." And if I'm not mistaken, "artiest" should be "artist."

xxx

"What is that I am missing and can it be fixed or is it just meant that I am to be alone in this world?"

Answers for questions like that ^ are hard to find... But I do believe everyone can find love, and eventually a relationship will work out...you're never truly alone, but I know what you mean, and you'll find her one day...

"No one to hold tight thru the night and wake up next my pomes are a part of my life deep thoughts written feelings to bear no can understand the poet that is me."

I think you mean "no one" or "none" when it says "NO can understand the poet that is me."

I can't quite remember how it was before, but I think it's layed out nicely now...

Stay strong and keep hope...and keep writing.

xxx

I must agree with Blush, it was hard to read. Anyway, it was good. Take care & keep writing. :)