Really cute poem, I like it. take care and keep writing...you have talent. I gave you 5/5 :-) really good poem!

Hey :) I really like this poem of yours... it really makes me think about *the perfect thing*! Never stop writting because you are talented :) maybe you can comment one of mine, too i would love to read your opinion
much love Marissa

Wow! That's all I have to say. You put A LOT of feeling and thought into this piece. It's truely one of my favorites. I hope to see more of ur writing! 5/5 Great work. If you would please read and comment on my poems and tell me what you think about them.
Smile,
Black~Rose