Comments : Hold On

  • 19 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Tight poem...Exactly how I feel. I'm this guys mistress...it's so hard...it started out just for fun...now its just killing me....I give you a 5....hit me up if you wanna talk , I would love to talk to you.

    ::MELI::

  • 19 years ago

    by Dee

    I always look forward to reading your new poetry. It's GREAT!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dee

    I didn't know how to respond to you. The one you said JERKS in, was actually about a guy who I worked with and was really good friends with before I met my husband. He had a girlfriend so we could never really see each other. We were so perfect for each other and we knew it. I gave him 3 months to decide what he would do with his life but then I met my husband. So that was the end of it. He eventually ended up marrying the girl and still complains but he had a child with her. He just can't walk away from the girl. WIMPS!

    And the other was just words flowing. It really did not have a lot of meaning.