by JJ
I can totally relate to this poem...I spend the majority of my free time in my room by myself, thinking, dreaming, reading, writing, whatever...I love it! great write! |
I love it and relate so much...I use to stay in my room for days, cause I knew that I would be safe....No one could hurt me...I was all alone but safe, just like you!!! |
Well it is random...but its very good to me. lolz...you are really talented and thats all i have to say...5/5 |
by BloodScars
I love it and its sooo true, but can you rhyme space with space??? lol thats ok i still give you a 5/5 |
by M MEM
This is really well written, its looking at the positive aspect of your room. very good 5/5 |
by katie!
That was brilliant, I love my room to, the only time I emerge from it is to eat, it really does make you feel safe, its your own personal space, you put across your love for your room very well, this was a really good, interesting poem, the most original I have read today, made me smile, I hope you have much more happiness in your room :) |
Nicely written! your actually really right about all of this, it was very well written, the flow was perfect too!! 5/5 |
by amanda
I loved your poem. The way that you wrote it its how i feel. i mean it is my own personal space. |
by Ann Stareyes
Amanda, |
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by sinister
Well done. i cant relate. i use to spend alot of time there myself. its still the safest place i can think of and there i am king. |
by Eibutsina
Reminds me of dope smoking teenage years lol Great write :o) |