Oh wow im crying now. Im sorry, would you name happen to be tom? or just a name you picked up? loved it |
by Carrie
Wow.. this is good... it's really sad... im sry about your friend... |
Tom would be a friend of mine... |
by Jordan
Wow...I started crying like right away. Its so hard to read stuff like this sometimes. I didn't think it was bad at all. |
I'm crying... this is really good... soooooooo sad but you've written it down really well. |
by Lu
OMG so sad and sorry to hear about your friend |
by amber
Oh my gosh that is so sad i love it it is so great |
I love poems bout 9/11,there so full of emotions, and that was really well done,im sorry bout ya friend and her dad |
by JL
Omg.....im speechless......its amazing! im so sorry this is true!! great job! 5/5 keep up the good work and take care! XXXXX |
by Mat
Awww that's sad... is it a true story about you and your father or just a child and their father? either way very well written, well constructed, 5/5 |
by tiffany
Wow when i read that i cried. thats sad and im sorry about ur friend. |
by Chelsi
No..its not good...its GREAT!! You have talent!! I hope your friends mom is alright?!! I wish more people would care more...about people like that..and watch them more..becuz it has to be really hard!! I hope you are doing alright!! Great job!! Keep writing!! 5/5 |
by Lemma
I love this poem, it's so sad it made me cry. I'm really sorry about your friend. Keep writing. |
How sad.... |
by beth
Wow I give this poem 5/5 because it impacted me sooo much I was in tears! but a good poem |
That's so sad, i hope you keep writing cuz you're really good at it |
I lost my best friend to suicide to it hurts to read things like that but we all sort of feel like doing that at some point and that poem was a great poem it shows you really cared and im sure f your friend was alive today she would be very proud. |
by MariiaShan
I know it probably doesn't mean much coming out of my mouth but You are extremely well gifted and I am very pleased to see that someone has finally written about the tragedy that struck the world in 2001.I too Lost someone in that flight...My Brother and well we may not have been the best of friends we were still really close. |
by Vanessa
I'm sorry about your friend. This poem made me cry. All of my love to you. |
by Kittie
Hey I hope that everything is ok with you, are you ok after your friend passed, well Iloved the poem, 5/5 |