Again great poem i like how it makes you sound free very good

This is a wonderfull poem and it expresses a lot.
good work

xx-HeavenzEyez-xx

Ooh i like this poem! its really unusual and some of the language you use is very peaceful and beautyful. one or two of the rhymes are a tiny bit forced but they still work and its a very nic epoem.

Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Its flowing and sweet...makes you feel like your floating! it really does...different techniques as well but really good!

It makes me feel sort of free and light. Peaceful. It very well written. It flows well and its beautiful. Well done!

Ooh i thought i already read this poem. anyhoo....good job... again, beautifully written,
xxx

I love it very good poem keep it up