The wind is calling her name

by Beth   Aug 28, 2005


Listen to your heart
your parents always say
but not to fair young juliet
who dreams the day away

in secret she whispers a tale
of great sadness, sorrow and woe
about a beautiful lady of grace
whose stories have been untold

no parents does this lady have
but nature takes there place
a father and mother the land has been
to the lady with an angel face.

wherever she goes she is protected
she follows her heart within
and softly in her ear she hears
the gentle voice of the wind

the wind is her guide to safety and fun,
she knows the wind will not steer her wrong
the wind is her friend
and keeps her heart beating strong

although she is loved by many many things
theres still something missing
something that should make her heart sing

but what could this be
this secret heart string
that her heart so long craves for
there must be something

but sadly the lady shall never know
that her heart will forever long for
the greatest power of all
one single kiss that\'ll make her heart soar.

(okay i need your help. what is the poem missing? what does it need? i need your input!!)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    You should think about getting rid of that comment ending. your poem is brillant and don't worry about changing anything.
    that is unless you want alot of comments. in that case keep up the good work

    Sam Mayo

  • 19 years ago

    by disenchanted

    This is really i great poem. I love the way it souns when you say it out loud. All the words click. I loved your first stanza. It really got me hooked and i read it to the end and then again out loud. Don't change a thing. it perfect, excellent.

    ஜAmyஜ

  • 19 years ago

    by HeavenzEyez

    To poem is brilliant, it really doesn't need anything else in it, it might even ruin it a little if you change anything else, so leave it as it is, your a great poet.

    xx-HeavenzEyez-xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Honestly I don't think it needs anything else.....I think its perfect the way it is. I really like it alot, its great. I gave it a 5/5, its a great poem and keep up the great work. I could really visulize the whole thing and thats what the reader need to do.....ofcourse I don't do that sometimes lol. But its a awsome poem so keep it up.

    Love,
    Kala

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