This poem has emotional depth. I felt as if I was struggling with you. Permission to quote a line..."feeding poison of Hell's desire"...that's memorable. I must read more of your work since you say this isn't your best.

Wow it was amazing! I was really entranced by it...its so deep.

Hey, really good, love the first line
'Dancing with the demons inside my head' - i don't know why but i think it sounds cool (yeah i know i'm weird lol)
Anywayz love your poems,
Charli XxXxXxX

Thatb is awesome i love it good job

Omfg kt that was fantastic! seriously i reakon ur best. it was soo awsum. that was seriously gr8! talk soon. luv ya heapz. amy

Your poem was very intriguing. I enjoyed reading it. Very creative and well-written.

Love,
Nana

Wow! that's almost all i can say. you have such talent, i sincerly hope you realize that. this iss an awesome poem. i haven't read any of your others but if this is "not your best" then i envy you even more than i had thught

Silvershade
a.k.a. Tanya
4 ever & 4 always

Wow.. thats amazing..

Excellent poem. GREAT!! 5/5! wonderful!

well expressed!

i like how you repeated the 2nd and 4th stanza.

i feel the exact same way... most days, i just swallow a bunch of pills, hoping to die, but it just doesn't do a thing... atleast not yet.

feel free to read my poems. hopefully, they will be of help. i have bipolar disorder-a mood disorder, so at times, it can be tough. i know how you feel... maybe not exactly--since, no one is perfect.

but, anyway, if you ever need anyone to listen, i will always be here for you. alright?

big hugs,

michelle