Ive read all your poems and they're all really good, i can relate to this one and i like it the most. Maybe try and plan ideas for a poem and link them all together to try and make a longer one? just an idea. reallly like your poems though . xxxx

Even tho i don't know u...i would definitly care if u were gone. And i know what u mean, being unnoticed. nobody ever sees my scars and cuts. Stay strong!