by ~.♥kÑÃ¥Zïe* îëÅméÑ♥::~ Aug 28, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I need to slice my skin |
Nice rhyming...lol...well...i like it...but I hope it's not true..but I know it is...so well...hope everything is going well in ur life...and u don't hev 2 touch the razor anymore... |
Even though i do :P |
I hope you stop cutting to but then I can't exactly talk I realised I was paired with you so I thought I shud comment on some - I think it shud be expanded and more in depth, I think you shud choose a topic you fully believe in like this and I think you should use either full words in all of it or slang in all of it cos u dunno what to expect. |
So sorry you have to write these poem...I hope you stop cutting already...it's not good... |
by Rachele
That's really good. it's like staright to the point. i like it a lot. 5/5 |