by N J Thornton Aug 28, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Rest your head upon the bough |
This was great. i loved the way it flowed, and Im just in love with the way you write. its so personal and you already have a beautiful style set in stone. I just love it, and the wa you use rhyme in such a different way, not using the normal boring rhyme that is sued by all. Very very well done. |
by SweetSuicide
Absolutey great..5/5 thanks for the comment ..i know that im not all that great ..but i love your work..maybe if you could give me some tips that would be awseome...but anyways awesome poem |
by Lydie
Great use of words, perfect descriptions..... However the only thing i would suffest is that you use capitals with each line which makes it a bit harder to read..... |