I totally agree with this...... I like the structure.....
In on ore two of the rymes they dont rhyme as well as the other but i still love it none the less.....
I i had to rate it out of 5
i would give it a 4.5 lol nah defintly a 5 out of 5........
Well hoping to read more of your poems and i shall comment on them.....
Feel free to have a look at my poems
WELL DONE!!!!!!!