That was a very good poem

A really tragic story... the rhyming was well done and it had a deep meaningful story to it...

Oh my gosh this is such an amazing poem i have almost tears wow, you have so much talent and this poem is so emotional, i love it, its really very touching and i loved reading it 5/5
take care

holly

Hey! This poem's really good. It's sad. Did u make that up? Or does that really happen to you? Wow, keep up the good writing!

I really liked it

WOW girl that is DAMN good you have some tallent I LOVE IT i hope you didnt have to go threw that to have to write it... keep it up
always alana

Omg k this poem is sad... cause ,... my mom ... beat me ... and shit ... and I like cried from it... but I like your poem ... comment on some of mine

Wow, im speachless..

OMG!!! I ღ THAT POEM! its so touching...i havent submitted any poems yet......btu when i do vote k?

5/5

MuCh LuVz,

Susaness ღ

Hey wow that was awesome! If only it didn't have truth to it for so many people! You have so much talent keep writing!

*Brooke*

That was really deep.it brought tears to my eyes.its a really good poem. keep writing!!

W0w.... this is amazing......you have a talent and you shouldnt ever stop writing.....keep at it....i wish i had this talent.

Love much

Jade

Increadable.. This is just so sad, especially to think that the mother had no clue as to what was going on. :( it makes me cry. Beautifuly written.

A girl...Beaten and Raped by her father....teased at school...sooo deep..LOVED IT....you have some lyrics..soo true ..but soo sad...

I know what ya mean gurl.

WOW...thats a really good poem !!!!

Wow that was really emotive. i'm so sorry if this is even remotely true, it's horrible.
great poem, congratulations on such a great piece of writing.
take care x x x
ps; if u could check out some of my poems sometime..it'd be great?!

Great poem poor girl great job keep it up

Wow.... very powerful writing. Keep it up
:)Smile:)

Im so sorry but this was an excellent poem and i hope to hear alot more from you !!!!