Comments : Dad doesn't care

  • 19 years ago

    by MariiaShan

    I know it probably doesn't mean much coming out of my mouth but you truly are very gifted.And if this poem is about you (wich it probably isn't otherwise you would be dead)but I know how you feel.

    sincerely devin

    lil_miss_gang_fighter@msn.com

    Incase you ever wanna talk

  • 19 years ago

    by AnglePassingThrough

    Hey my name is jessica and i was just wondering y u wrote this poem, if u would like to share and need a friend im here for u my email is webster902002@yahoo.com

  • 19 years ago

    by jocelyn

    It's a really good poem and the same time it makes me want to cry cause it's sad and reminds me of my self my life is driving me insain and i live crying in pain

  • 19 years ago

    by kiri

    Hey wat made u rite that poem it is realli realli gud it brought tears to my eyes caz i kno x-actely how u feelif u eva wanna talk u can email or add me at i_luv_kaitlyn_n_lleyton_4_life@hotmail.com luv alwayz kiri Xx0o

  • 19 years ago

    by Amber

    CANT DESCRIBE, BUT LOVE IT. IM CHOKED UP!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kittie

    You have a lot of Talent girl loved the poem if its about you I hope every thing ends up ok 5/5!!!
    Lots O' Love
    BloodRedRose

  • 19 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    What an amazing and touching poem, your lines really convey the story and your feelings well, keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Purple

    Wonderfull, wonderfull poem, I'm crying as I write this. You're brave to put this up even if it has nothing to do with your own expirences. No one should have to deal with anything like this. I remember when I felt suisidel, I feel so silly about it. I was just a little kid, I knew I couldn't go through with it, and plus I never wanted to hurt people who care about me I knew that would. Sorry If I turned that towards me. I never really talk about that through. I'm only 13, how could I?

  • 19 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Hiya that was really a sad and poem that touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes but that must of took u a while and it was so good, keep it up. i am adding you to my fav's

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    I love it, it is really good, but really sad.

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    Wow. this made me almost cry. Very talented. I love it. Great job and keep it up

    .Savannah.

  • 19 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Oh that poem can relate to alot of ppl but man ur so talented n thats was soooo sad it made me cry n think bout ma family. 5/5 keep it up. its a real GREAT poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Krysten

    WoW i loved it it really moved me

  • 18 years ago

    by Kys Dirty Little Secret

    Omg my makeup is gunna come off wow this one really scared me and made me cry and now my makeup is running but you are a really good poet KUDOS to you 5/5 luv ya kal

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    That was like the best poem ever!
    wow 5/5 4 sure!

  • 18 years ago

    by ëMmÅ

    I lv this poem. could u please vote & comment my poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Chemically Corrupted

    I love it. it says alot about the real world.

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow i don't know what to say....wait I do. This was excellent lol. I truly loved it and it was so sad. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kally

    Wow this was unbealivably good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x