Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

Omg this is sad and heartbreaking. i love this poem. its so sad. i was about to cry (literally) man this is deep. i like the way you ended it with the journal entry. great job 5/5

Thats so sad. your very good at writing poems! i mean it!

This is a very touching poem. I'm sorry if you knew someone who went through this. Keep up the good work!

Wow this is like one of the best poems i have ever read in my life its soo good im not even kidding good job
5/5

Omg... i love it
i love it soo much
omg, i love it soo much

WOW.....honestly tht was freakin amazing

Omg! I'm crying.. It's so sad. ;_;
Great job!

Hey
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just wanted 2 say dat i really liked ur poem=]
-LiL mIsS nIcE gUrL!!

Wow amazing poem
don't apologize for it being long
the reader doesn't even notice because you wrote it so well and kept me intrigued !
sad poem...i hope its not real
5/5 <33

Really nice poem i like
do u think you could checkmine out
thx

kepp up the awsome work

I really loved this poem, its majorly inspiring in a way, im not sure how to explain it! But I love your writing its amazing! and Us people with the fathers like that need to stick together!! DEFINETLY 5/5 KUDOS!!

That was really good, i understand what you are going through, i went through the same thing. just keep your head up, and you'll get through it

I love that poem i read it millions of times its so deep u deserve all theese comments and everything!you are trully amazing, 5/5 i loved the last past the most ..;)

Everyone. I am so sorry that I haven't. Been writting lately. I have.. but I never post them anymore. I came across this site after many yrs of not checking it. It makes me happy to see people still read my work. Life has changed for me. I now have a daughter who is 2. She saved me from myself.

Love you all so much <3

So sad xx