Interesting poem, the way you went through each part of life was interesting, I liked the way you wrote it, it was interesting, the poem did not drag on which was good and it got its point across.. well done

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Now this...this is a poem...truly original...amazing....a smooth flow...a unique style...hahaha..keep it up k?...i hope to see more of your work...haha :D